22A – Elevator Pitch 3
1) https://youtu.be/MuaAo5mzhXs
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
I received some excellent feedback from classmates this time around. Millie suggested I use a story as my attention grabber and Macy just mentioned to speak up to exude more confidence in my pitch.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
I changed my entire introduction, hopefully it was the right decision and just tried to listen to the advice to speak louder.
Hey Danielle!
ReplyDeleteRight of the bat, I can say that your elevator pitch was so easy to relate to! You were able to perfectly emphasize why people should use your app and how it would help solve their needs. You also presented the functionality of your app in a way that was so easy to understand. Your delivery was articulate and clear; what more could you want. Really great job on this pitch!
Danielle,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed listening to your pitch. I think you did a great job identifying all the important aspects of your business and performed it in a really nice way. You were calm and collected the entire time and had no trouble getting the message of your business across to the audience. You seem to have this pitch down very well so keep it up. Nice job.